divendres, 19 de maig del 2017

Write an opinion essay in which you talke into account the school system? The teachers and the students.

I think that the education system must improve a lot, because everytime more children leave studies with only 16 years. 
Also I think that for improve education system what it takes are more social educators to help more these teenagers witch do not succeed so ahead and they can finish eso.
The teachers everytime there are more than they eorl without vocation and this affects students.
The students who don't have family stable and that there support with studies they left school studies because the teachers also not give motivation. 
I think that the best solution it would be that more relation between teenagers and teachers because it would create more confidence and students would have more interest on the subjects.
Imagine you have a toxic friend that is runing your life. Write a letter to him/her explaining the problem and proposing solutions to re-establish your mutual confidence.

Dear Gemma, how are you?
I write you because I want to help you.
I tire that you tell lines everyday and I help and I be by your side for something that is false.
I know that you don't suffer any disease, you don't be anorexic and all is lie.
I know that now you living the best life because everybody give you all their love and atention. But I think that lie with this disase it's not good, you are very wrong doing this. I'm angry because you lied to me with this big lie, but I want to help you get out of this lie.
I propose to talk with you and you parents about the thruth
Are love-locks romantic or  menace? Write a for argainst essay about this practice.

I think it is difficult to have an open relationship and that It will work out well. If it works it's because  the couple and when they meet with another person who is not their love.
I couldn't have an open relationship because I have a intensive feelings and I couldn't have something with another person if I don't have feelings for him.
I would feel incomfortable. If I will go to study in another country for long time probably I would have an open relationship but with conditions or limits with my couple. For exemple if my boyfriend would go to the party and he wants to be with a girl he can but after he can't give his number neither meet again. It's obiusly that he has to tell me what he has done

dijous, 11 de maig del 2017



Are we too dependent on mobil phones? Could we live without mobile phones nowdays? Write an opinion essay?


In recent years, an increasing number of mobiles pohone around the world phones are a big help, it has a big service. The question is whether this is good for everyone.

One the one hand,  Mobile phones have progressed a lot and almost all people of the world have one. I'm dependent on the mobile phone. I use it many hours and now I wouldn't live without it. 
But  I think that other people would in  the same situation. I think that years ago people could be without mobile phone.

They went out more than now and met each other because they didn't depend on mobile phones.

divendres, 28 d’abril del 2017

Human Rights, China: detained activist, journalist denied needed health care

China are earning an ugly reputation because is preventing acces to adequate medical tratment of their prisioners and aslo some prisioners had suffer tortures from China. We have three diferent case of the illegal behaviour of China. The first case is Guo who was admitted to the prision hospital one year later that he was arrested. He didn't have healthcare tratement before because the prison officers refused and also he complained that his room was in bad conditions. The other case is Gao Yu who has a long history of heart disease: high bloog preasure, a chronic skin allergy and suffers from Ménière's disease. She was only treatedin a hospital the last time that she was in prison.The last one is Tibetan monk Tenzin Delect Rinchope who died in prison. Before his death he was tortured and he was in deterioring health.

In my opinion that is a serious problem and it is necessary to find a solution. China doesn't obey the law. China had doing illegal actions and this is very worrying, we are in XXI century and this is not believable. China acting against the law and also the Human Rights too.


INS Castelló d'Empúries
17486 Castelló d'Empúries
28/04/17
Plaça de Sant Jaume, 4 (Palau de la Generalitat)
08002  Barcelona
93 402 46 00

Dear  Mr. President of the Catalonia,  Carles Puigdemont

We are  writing to complain about the article number five of the human rights, that explains that no one shall be subjected to torture or to curel, inhuman or deagradinf tretament or punishment .

Personally this article is violated in a lot of countries, normally in the developing countries, because these countries people are in poor conditions, and they are more vulnerable to violate this human right. Moreover in these countries is easer to mistreat the women.

We think that it is important to do something for these people and not to prop up these terrible actions. For these reasons we propose to law down laws to stop the violations of the human rights.

Finally, we would like people to be conscious about that and to make possible to put out this information in the magazines or newspaper, because people must realice and make something to improve it and eliminated it.

Yours sincerely,
Anna Cotcho.




divendres, 17 de març del 2017

DIFFERENCES BETWEEN CULTURES AND RELIGIONS IN THE SAME COUNTRY

Nowadays, fortunately, in our world, there is diversity, in each country there are people from other countries and, therefore, with other origins. As time goes on, it seems that diversity is starting to be seen as normal and is accepted by most of the population. Despite this, there are still people who don’t understand nor accept that diversity of people.
Changing a little bit the perspective of this matter, I would consider the idea that people who move on to another country, don’t adapt themselves to the new culture or religion. This could be a problem with some countries, but it seems that in our country we accept that immigrants don’t adapt to our culture.
Therefore, in our country we can find, for example: mosques, women wearing headscarves, men wearing tunics, etc. But it’s not only how we see these immigrants from outside, it’s also how these immigrants think or act according to their religion.

Personally, I think that the last I have said, - how immigrants think or act according to their religion-, is the fact which could create more problems in our society. For instance: the idea of having many children or having two different wives -which is forbidden in our country-. Instead of this, many immigrants have multiple wives.